Emotional Writing on One of the Aspects of a Problem at Work, Essay Example

I simply hate the way you refuse to see the problem, not mentioning the outrageous unwillingness to improve a situation so that everyone would benefit! Why not make a move, the more so that it does not require any great effort on your part? Why never stir a finger to help the professionals take care of your baby? Whimpering and whining about the problems of your child in one thing, but you should also understand that if there are people who can help you to get out of the mess, no obstacles should be put in their way! Cluttering a whole Everest of teddies next to your baby’s cot would never help him: it would only prevent the nurse from coming in and changing the feeding pipe timely — is it something you would wish for your baby?

Comment

In the passage above, emotion obviously affects the style of writing and the changes that can be traced are:

• an extensive use of emotionally colored vocabulary (“hate”, “outrageous”, “stir a finger”, “whimpering”, “whining”, “get out of the mess”, “cluttering”, etc);
• exclamatory sentences which reflect a high emotion of the author;
• use of rhetoric questions.